10 Mart 2010 Çarşamba

Toledo-Manisa

What about feeling the ancient times in a city now ? Or do you like going to a modern city? It is your choice but i prefer a modern city.If you want a place which makes you feel as if you were at another time,you must g oto Toledo.On the other hand,if you want a modern city,you mst go to Manisa.They sound differnt but they have similarities.
In a nutshell,their people are very friendly.You can take help whenever you need.They have so many ancient places to visit.There are good parks in order to feel the silence.Both of them are small city and close to a big city.(Manisa-Izmir,Toledo-Madrid) They are located on mountains.
In spite of their similarities,These cities are different.Toledo has a big catredhal and a palace called Alcazar.They are very fantastic and when you enter these buildings,you can loose yourself.All of the antiques have been prevented and impress you so much.However,in Manisa,there is a big mosque but it is really antique.It is too hard to enter these building.In contrast,Toledo has excellent street which is stone.Then,while walking,you will see small houses and all of them have gardens.It is really good to stay in there.The roofs see the whole city and it is perfect to watch the scene of cathedral and Alcazar.However,there are so many big aparments in Manisa and it is more crowded than Toledo.That’s why,the transportion is generally more difficult.Toledo has also good discos,bars where you can entertain.Manisa has no place to go for this aim
Actually,Manisa is a modern city but because of being close to Izmir,it can’t improve.All people prefer to go to Izmir.Toledo has all antiques and modern things.You can choose whichever you want.

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  1. hi seda,
    I like your essay a lot, but there are some mistakes such as spelling.In addition, second paragraph doesn't have topic sentence. In spite of them, while reading it, I enjoyed. ;)

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