19 Aralık 2010 Pazar

No Place To Go

Can you imagine that you can’t find anything to have a fun in a city ? You must just go a

house and another house or a few cafe which you already have so much time in there.Don’t

think about so much.Manisa is exactly the same feauters like these.You really don’t go

anywhere and you haven’t got a social life.


The first reason is Manisa is close to Izmir.Izmir has got so many things,you can find

everything you want and look for.Bacuse of this,people choose to go there.You can go Izmir

in almost 30 minutes and it is better than looking for something in Manisa.You can find

veriaty things,more beautful and sometimes cheaper needs.



Other reason is nobody wants to investigate Manisa.All of them know that,people will

chooseIzmir and they can go there easily.It is not logical to build a mall or better

cinemas,cafees.They think that they will not take money back as they spend for a new things.



Another reason is Manisa is an undeveloped city.There is no an interesting place to go or

spend time.It doesn’t have so many shopping centers to buy good thing.you don’t have any

chocies.Surely,if you live there,you can just have clothes which you buy two or three stores.



In conclision,Manisa is a boring city.You can’t go anywhere,may be you can walk around

all of the city in one hour.when you meet your friends,you will have to go the same

cafe.Manisa must be developed and then people can find something to do here instead of

going to Izmir.

12 Aralık 2010 Pazar

Perfect husband!

Everyone wants a perfect person to live happy forever.However,It is a really hard decision to

choose this person…You will share your house,your bed,your body,your decisions,your

opinions…Actually,you won’t say “me” again,You will say ”us”…I will definitely have hard

days to find this person,because I think I want so many things..


Firstly,he will be like me…He can laugh when I laugh,he can cry when I cry…He must feel

what I feel.He can understand my inside and for example,If I want to something,I shouldn’t

say..He must get it and give me.He should get everything while looking at my eyes.I must feel

his love while looking or touching him…He should make me feel better.He must shock me

when there is nothing,when I don’t expect something…After I get that he really love me,I

look at his job.Ofcourse,it is not so important that how much he earns but I should be sure our

future..We will have children and we must think their future,too.I want a teacher

husband.May be he won’t earn so much but he will earn enough.We will have many

holidays.The most important thing is we can have the same holidays.We will be together

more time.Already,I can’t understand the other couples who works all day,they can’t see each

other,they don’t have enough time to be together…They have to work but I definitely choose

a teacher.Anyway,Another wish i want is he mustn’t be mess in the house.I’m his wife,sure I

will do houseworks,he doesn’t have to help me but he should collect his own clutters.

.Especially,I don’t want him in the kitchen.Bacause I have never met a man who is good at

cooking,I want to protect my kitchen from a huge mess.

I read it and I understood that ı don’t want to so many things.It is very simple..He must love

me and it will be better if he will be a teacher.That’s all!

3 Kasım 2010 Çarşamba

Unusual Treatment : Laugh !

Can you believe in someone who says that laughing is a treatment?There may
be many different answers but I belive that laughing can help to improve in health.Most
people can know Norman Couins, the man who laughed himself to wellness.He had
anklyosing spondylitis and his doctor said that he would be died soon.He didn’t accept this
result.He studied and researched how he could overcome this disease.He found thet negative
things affects badly and leapt to a conclusion.Positive things can help to heal.then he use the laughing way.I agree with him.Laughing can be usefull to heal

Laughter has many benefits for our body. It dissolves tension, stress, anxiety,
irritation, anger, grief, and depression. Like crying, laughter lowers inhibitions, allowing the release of pent-up emotions. After a hearty bout of laughter, you will experience a sense of well-being.It was proved by scientists.We also know that when we get sick,we need pshychological support and we want to laugh.we need to be happy,bacause we are already in a bad situation,we must take positive things.Some people defend on using medicine.If we don’t use medicines,we cant heal.Of course,we may need medicines,however,the most important thing is good mood.

Norman’s story proves everything.Laughing and happyness are helping hand to get
better.We must laugh to laugh again.

24 Ekim 2010 Pazar

Compare and Contrast Pharagraph About Films

At first,these films are about life.Both of them told difficulties.Angela's Ashes told about budgetary troubles but The Miracle Worker was establised on physical defects.Secondly,They expressed the time when the children growing.Helen who was blind and deaf had a wild attitudes because of her lacks,however Franki was a good child,took care of his brothers and his family.Films show that life is really hard if we have lacks.Actually,the miracle worker proves that we can handle with troubles even if people don't believe us.No matter how hard people can touch with each other and so they overcome these difficulties.I think Angela's Ashes is better film.It is closer the life and poverty and misery are showed effectively.However,we learn one thing that teach us "if we breathe,there is always hope"

20 Mayıs 2010 Perşembe

Cause And effect Essay ( The Most Stressful People In The World : University Students )

Stress is avoidable emotion in daily life.Stress is occured by not just for negative events but for positive events. However especially,the university students are in pressure of stress.Getting used to new city,dissappoint the university and relationships…These mostly cause the stress.

At first,changing the life is one of the most difficult thing for people and these students come to a new city;they don’t know any people,any place and it is so difficult to get used to stay a new home.They become to think what they will do next day,how the day will go on,which person is good or bad etc…These cause the stres and it becomes so confusing as the time passed.

Secondly,they thought that everything would be perfect at the university when they passed the universtiy exam.The university is perfect,the friends are entertaining and good,the lessons are not boring,they can go everywhere whenever they want.This always happens because their family,teachers took courage them with these things before they came to university.When they see the realities,they disappoint.This also cause to stres by the time they give up their dreams.

The third cause is relationships.While they meeting new people,at first they like them.they trust them.Some people can hide their own characters;they look as if they were nice people.Students trusted and when they see real face,they feel bad.Or they may fall in love another person and they can’t be loved. Students really are under the stress because they didn’t come across these chaos when they were high school.Relationships in the university are different from in the past

That’s why university students are really under the stress.To get used to a new life necessitate so many experince and so much strong.These students come from prosperity but they didn’t know before they come to university and so they feel the stress in their whole body

Process Essay (THE FIRST DAY OF LOVE)

Relationships are important,especially,when finding true love.People are always excited about the day when they meet their sweet heart the first time.Generally,people can’t find the person to love him/her and the first meeting determines fort he future of the relationship.Actually,girls give a special importance to this day.

Firstly,the day when they meet starts a week ago.girl thinks about what she will wear,how she will act and share them to her friends.The friends always suggest and if there is no clothes fort this day,shopping isn’t avoidable.she thinks that her apperance must be perfect and affects him.She also tries to be natural but she can’t do it.

In this day,she wakes up early.May be she can not sleep the last night because of thinking everything.She thinks how she should greet him,what she speaks…this list never lasts…Before three hours she begings to prepare.At first,she takes a shower and it lasts one hour.Then she makes up,make her hair.She tries her clothes again and again and she absolutely doesn’t like clothes even if she decided to wear them yesterday.She may cry and think not to meet.though there is no problem,she creates them.Her hair,her clothes and then the eyes which are bloody because of crying.

While thinking and crying,one message is received.Boy says that he is coming,she becomes to be excited and can’t think the problems.When she sees him,at first, her heartbeates gain speed.Neverthless,the boy is so relax that,it makes her feel better.They talk about themselves.It looks boring but they begin to feel another heart in their own heart.

This is the process of the meeting which continues happily.Boys and girls feel these thing when they really love.I hope every lonely person can live this day soon…

6 Mayıs 2010 Perşembe

ARGUMANTATIVE ESSAY

Education Problem In Turkey

Education is one of the most importatnt problems in Turkey.You know that education is necessity for everything;to improve the government,prosperity etc... and so if there is an education problem,it brings all of the problems.There must be a solution for these problems.

At first,education must be interesting.The books which are given are stereotype so students think that they are obligations not necessities.It is not good to study these books,it is boring.Students don't like them and don't study.However,they have responsibilities about exams.They have to study and pass the class.These are only stereotype.Some people say that there are basic rules about informations but they must be tought in an interesting way not with books.

Second problem is teachers.They try to impose their thoughts to students.Most of them don't care about other opinions.some of them just think money and pss the time in the class. "I earn money already and it doesn't matte if I teach something or not" Because of this,students see them like unnecessary people.There is a wrong thing.Students can be friends with teachers and learn something.They can talk about their thoughts,then they learn easier.

Last problem causes education problem and education problem causes it.It is loop.People,especially, in east think the girls can not go to school,they have to stay at home and they must take care of their family.It is the most important problem.Boys aren't more powerful than girls.this must be known and girls can study with boys.

In conclusion,the problems which lead to lac of education are so many.If we want to talk about all of them,we need to more time.These are basic problems and before we collect other problems leaded to education,solutions musn't be ignored.

10 Mart 2010 Çarşamba

Being aware of a bad thing

Why do people smoke even if they know that it is harmful?All of smokers are aware of its harms.Also,it smells disgusting,it is expensive,it causes so many physical problems and it kills quickly.There are two main causes which lead to smoke ; emotional problems and choosing bad friends.
If people have emotional problems,of course,they want to get rid of it.They think that smoking is a solution.The first thing they think smoking helps them when they try to cope with stress,they feel as if they were relax while smoking (nicotin may cause it ) but it is mostly occured by psychological.They also like smoking.It is believed that,especially among Turkish people,they don't think they will be ill.They always say "nothing will happen to me",and these are my favorites ;"if it is very harmful,why is it sold ?" " i can give up,but it won't be able to give me up.It is my faithful friend" "cigarette is better than a bad friend"
The other reason is,as i said ; choosing bad friends.Of course,you can be good friend even if you're smoker but you must prevent your non-smoker friend.In contrast,most people don't care about it.A non-smoker friend looks his friend and says "if he smokes,i can also smoke.He is not superior than me " then he starts to smoke.Neverthless,the other friend who is smoker supports him and they begin smoking together.It generally happens at the age of 10-20.Youngers want to prove themselves and they think that smoking is the best way.
We can not do anything to prevent smoking.Even if we know it is harmful,we smoke.Neverthless,if we want to understand that it is really useless,we can give it up easily.Everything depends on in our heads

Toledo-Manisa

What about feeling the ancient times in a city now ? Or do you like going to a modern city? It is your choice but i prefer a modern city.If you want a place which makes you feel as if you were at another time,you must g oto Toledo.On the other hand,if you want a modern city,you mst go to Manisa.They sound differnt but they have similarities.
In a nutshell,their people are very friendly.You can take help whenever you need.They have so many ancient places to visit.There are good parks in order to feel the silence.Both of them are small city and close to a big city.(Manisa-Izmir,Toledo-Madrid) They are located on mountains.
In spite of their similarities,These cities are different.Toledo has a big catredhal and a palace called Alcazar.They are very fantastic and when you enter these buildings,you can loose yourself.All of the antiques have been prevented and impress you so much.However,in Manisa,there is a big mosque but it is really antique.It is too hard to enter these building.In contrast,Toledo has excellent street which is stone.Then,while walking,you will see small houses and all of them have gardens.It is really good to stay in there.The roofs see the whole city and it is perfect to watch the scene of cathedral and Alcazar.However,there are so many big aparments in Manisa and it is more crowded than Toledo.That’s why,the transportion is generally more difficult.Toledo has also good discos,bars where you can entertain.Manisa has no place to go for this aim
Actually,Manisa is a modern city but because of being close to Izmir,it can’t improve.All people prefer to go to Izmir.Toledo has all antiques and modern things.You can choose whichever you want.

4 Mart 2010 Perşembe

Marrying a perfect man

What will you do if you fall in love with a man who grew up in another country ?When you think this,at first,it sounds good.You will see another culture,life style,religion,language.Already you love this man.However,are you ready to share all your life with him ?Can you get used to his differences?
These differences can cause a lot of problems.First of all,you have to express yourself easily to your husband.Before marrying,surely, you would say "he is my perfect man" then after you must think the same thing forever.That's why ,you will share your opinions,interestings,wishes...If you do not say all of these in your native language,it can not be effective as good as you wish.No matter how fluently you speak his language,it can not the same.I think,language is the first problem.Second problem is life style.You must get used to a new culture.All countries have their own morals.Something you think bad can be normal for your husband.You can not find very odd,because he used to and he will do it in the same way.You can't cope with it.Some peole say that the most important thing is love.I don't think so.Because you do not have the same language,culture,the love is useless.you must have shared your past.Of course,it is not necessary that they are exactly similar,but it must not be totally different.
If you want to marry a man,you must be careful.You will be together as you die.Before dying,you can say that "i shared all my life,love and past with my perfect man"...

Sweet Planet In My Life(REVISED)

How can you describe yourself ?Only with words,songs or your room ? All people know that if you don't stay with someone,you can't know a person truly.Certainly,it is right.The room expresses its owner character.When i come to my room,I listen to myself
At first,I forget my troubles when i lie down on my bed.I feel that i'm safe with its smooth face.I look at my purple ceiling.The first thing i think is the day when i painted the room with my father.It has so many symbols which express nothing,however,it means so many things.While painting,i always painted badly and my father tried to fix it.It was so funny.The colours of wordrobes are grey,really,grey and purple are complement each other.When i turn to my head to left,i see my brother's bed.When we were children,we continuosly fought for this bed.Because it is bigger than the other,we thought it was moe comfortable.However,after he went to university,i got the realities.Of course,the bed hadn't been more comfortable but now it is special for our memories.
One wall has so many things;posters,shelves,panos..You can not see the colour of the wall.One of panos is filled with family photographs,the other has photographs with my friends and the middle pano has poems which i wrote.If you read them,you can not stand laughing.They are funny because i wrote them when i was a child.I'm keeping all my presents on the shelves;my first gift from my father (it is a clock like a house),a cat which yells when you touch,knicknocks,a little bear,and letters,postcards from my friends who are away from Manisa.At the opposite of this wall it has a window but it does not look outside.It is horrible,i was always afraid of looking from it.Ovet the bed i sleep has a big shelf.I lined up my cassettes there,most of the singers are old,they are still my favorites,anyway.I listened to them from my cassette player after turning off the lights.I feel as if I lived my old days again and again.
All the parts of room are like what i want.It has my memories,my childhood and i wish i could still grow up there...