Everyone wants a perfect person to live happy forever.However,It is a really hard decision to
choose this person…You will share your house,your bed,your body,your decisions,your
opinions…Actually,you won’t say “me” again,You will say ”us”…I will definitely have hard
days to find this person,because I think I want so many things..
Firstly,he will be like me…He can laugh when I laugh,he can cry when I cry…He must feel
what I feel.He can understand my inside and for example,If I want to something,I shouldn’t
say..He must get it and give me.He should get everything while looking at my eyes.I must feel
his love while looking or touching him…He should make me feel better.He must shock me
when there is nothing,when I don’t expect something…After I get that he really love me,I
look at his job.Ofcourse,it is not so important that how much he earns but I should be sure our
future..We will have children and we must think their future,too.I want a teacher
husband.May be he won’t earn so much but he will earn enough.We will have many
holidays.The most important thing is we can have the same holidays.We will be together
more time.Already,I can’t understand the other couples who works all day,they can’t see each
other,they don’t have enough time to be together…They have to work but I definitely choose
a teacher.Anyway,Another wish i want is he mustn’t be mess in the house.I’m his wife,sure I
will do houseworks,he doesn’t have to help me but he should collect his own clutters.
.Especially,I don’t want him in the kitchen.Bacause I have never met a man who is good at
cooking,I want to protect my kitchen from a huge mess.
I read it and I understood that ı don’t want to so many things.It is very simple..He must love
me and it will be better if he will be a teacher.That’s all!
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a nice essay but u should have developed your essay. I loved it.usig sentences is true.intoduction paragraph is vey beutiful.
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YanıtlaSilActually you don't want so many things:)I like it your essay especially the part of sharing everything and feeling the same things.your introduction paragraph is really impressive, but you can develop your body part. thanks:)
hi seda =) your ideas is good and your sentences are well-orgenized but ı think you should have used many more ironical words.however,it is a well-written essay.ı like it.thank you =)
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